"Redemption's Run": Chapter 21 closes; chapter 22 begins

May 23, 2017 at 5:42PM

A Star Tribune serialized novel by Jane Fredericksen

Chapter 21

The story so far: The crew sees the scars of Kinney's violent past.

Hattie reached out her hand, but Kinney's shot out first and held hers like a vise. His eyes were wide and staring, but did not seem to focus.

"Don't touch me!" he screamed.

He lashed out blindly, striking her. Hattie staggered back and tried to recover. Kinney's next blow caught the medical bag, scattering its contents across the cabin.

Ronnie, Hattie and the doctor grabbed Kinney's flailing arms and tried to pin them down, but he was like a madman, thrashing wildly.

Kacie dropped her mug of coffee and raced to him. "Kinney! Stop! They're trying to help!"

He stopped struggling. Turned glassy eyes toward her.

"Gina?"

She could try to explain, or she could play along. She took his hand.

"I'm here for you."

He gripped both her hands, painfully. She was astonished that he had so much strength left. He was trembling, insistent. His breath came in deep sobs.

"You have to run. Promise me. Promise!"

"I promise."

He relaxed. As if the effort had drained him.

His gaze drifted from Kacie to the storm outside. His voice became Kinney's again, soft as a dying breeze at the edge of shore.

"And you have to let me go."

His eyes closed. His head slumped. His hand fell from hers.

"Kinney!" screamed Ronnie. "Come back!" She and the medical team jumped forward to try to revive him. Kacie moved back. She didn't want to get in the way.

No one seemed to notice her. All eyes were focused on Kinney.

Kacie continued to back away to the far bunk, staring at her hands. The hands he had held. And she remembered …

His hand, raised, ready to strike — but holding back.

His hand, guiding hers on the wheel.

His hand, pulling her from the stormy lake.

His blood, on her hands.

She closed her eyes, clasped her hands together, and prayed: to God, to the wind, to her mother, to anyone who would listen.

"I know you can take him," she whispered. "But please, for my sake, let him stay."

She opened her eyes, hoping for a miracle.

But Kinney's eyes remained closed.

Chapter 22

Light everywhere. So bright, his eyes stung.

He knew the smell, but could not place it: acrid, burning.

He remembered the taste: dry and medicinal.

Talk to me, he ordered, and the wind whispered gently from his port bow. It beeped, quietly and rhythmically. Suddenly, it spoke in a clear, distinct voice. "You can't run. You can't hide."

Deep breaths — but he could not. His chest felt constricted.

He heard a scream.

With growing dread, he opened his eyes fully.

He was lying on his back in a hospital bed. In Duluth, he guessed. Every part of his body felt battered and bruised and weary beyond belief. He knew he would feel worse, if not for the intravenous bag attached to his arm. His right leg was in a cast, hoisted in a sling above him. His ribs were tightly wrapped and it pained him to breathe. A heart monitor beeped methodically.

Kinney's eyes flicked clockwise around the room. They took in everything. The open window, the wind billowing white curtains like spinnakers. The television set mounted in the upper left corner, tuned to some B-grade horror flick. The antiseptically clean walls that explained the pungent smell. A sketch of a pirate taped on the wall opposite him. A bubble from the pirate's mouth ordered, "Get Well!" Kacie, in a chair beside him, asleep. A table with a half-empty glass of water …

He stopped and moved his eyes back.

Kacie, in a chair beside him, asleep.

Tomorrow: Chapter 22 continues.

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