When last we left poor Charlie Jackson, the 10-year-old was surrounded in dark lake water by ghostly white muskies -- including his father, who had turned into a fish after being bitten by one of them. What happens next in this children's ghost serial? You tell me! Submissions for the final Chapter 4 of The Tale of the Haunted Muskie are due to jeremy.olson@startribune.com by 8 p.m. Sunday, Oct. 30. Try to keep them 500 words or less. The chosen Chapter 4 and complete story will be published on the Star Tribune web site on Monday -- so you can frighten or amuse your children with it on Halloween Night!

Newcomers to the story are invited to participate. A link to all Chapter 4 submissions will be available on Monday for interested readers. Below are the first three chapters:

The first two chapters are in italics below, with the third new chapter at the end.

CHAPTER 1, published Monday, Oct. 10: Once every October, Charlie Jackson’s family drove north to an old smelly cabin on Lake Belle Taine. There was something very familiar – very boring – about the trip. It usually followed the fourth or fifth call from Charlie’s principal. This time, Charlie’s mom and dad were so fed up, they barely let him talk the whole four-hour drive.

“Mom,” Charlie protested, “You don’t understand. If I didn’t pull the fire alarm, the whole school was going to explode!”
His mom, Wendy, didn’t respond. The only noise was the muffled music from his big sister’s headphones.
“Another classic story from the bone-brain,” Lisa shouted.
The car rolled into the town of Nevis, like it did every year. His father, Bill, started walking into the local gas station, like he did every year. But then he turned around, like he did every year.
“Lisa,” he said, “watch your brother. Charlie, stay in that seat!”
Nevis was boring for a 10 year old like Charlie – well, almost boring. Across the street from the gas station was a giant fish – the Nevis Tiger Muskie. Charlie climbed inside its gaping mouth when he was six, only to hit his head and need stitches. He climbed on top of it when he was eight, then slipped off and sprained his right arm.
With his parents out of sight, Charlie got out of the car and walked across the road to stare at the great and mysterious plastic fish.
Something wasn’t right. He squinted.
The fish’s bulging eyes were narrower – meaner. It wasn’t in the right place either. Charlie knew the fish was supposed to be two steps from the closest picnic table, because that was how he jumped on top of the fish. The picnic table hadn’t moved, but the fish was four, five steps away at least.
Charlie looked around the town. Had anyone noticed? Across the street, an old man was staring out a storefront window. At the gas station, two teenagers were giggling. Inside the car, his sister hadn’t even noticed he was gone.
Charlie whirled back around at the Muskie. What was that?! Had it just winked? Nooooooo. The fall wind whipped in from the lake at the edge of town. Charlie shivered. 

CHAPTER 2, by James McAlpine, published Monday Oct. 17:

Charlie turned and headed for the car, hoping to avoid the watchful eyes of his father. As he reached the door, a voice whispered “see you on the water.” Charlie snapped his head around, finding nothing but the old man across the street staring back at him. Charlie convinced himself the wind had played tricks on him.
His father drove out of town, traveling on the hilly road to the cabin. The sensation was like a roller coaster for Charlie. He remembered in years past getting car sick from this part of the trip. But now, something was different. The leaves were scarce on the trees, leaving a view of the lake as they traveled. Charlie stared between the trees, seeing the spots he had fished before, and picked out new spots he wanted to fish. And there was only one fish Charlie had in mind.
The car pulled in to the woods and up to the cabin. It was as he remembered: plain, dusty, cold and waiting to be brought to life again with the last visitors of the year before winter arrived. Charlie took his fishing gear down to the shore. He traveled a well-worn and familiar path, carrying his Muskie poles and oversized net down to the dock.  The wind blew hard across the lake causing a small light aluminum blue fishing boat to bump against the dock.
“What are you fishing for, son?” a gravelly voice asked.  Charlie turned to find an old man with a weathered face in overhauls and flannel shirt peering at him. Startled, Charlie dropped his gear and replied “Muskie!” 
“Ah, the fish of 10,000 casts” the old man said, nodding his head. The old man’s eyes narrowed and he looked at Charlie. “I’ve been the handyman at the resort next door for 50 years and fished Muskie even longer. I can tell ya, right now, they ain’t biting. Why don’t you go on home?”
“No way.” Charlie said. “We’ll get em.”
“Tell me something, son, what is your name?”
“Charlie,” the old man repeated. “Well Charlie, you going out in that little fishing boat?”
Charlie nodded. The old man walked closer and leaned forward.
“Bit of advice Charlie,” he said. “This year, don’t fish too late for Muskie, and get off the lake by sundown.”
Just then the boat crashed hard into the dock and one of the ties came loose. Charlie turned and ran to get his father. As he dashed up the path, he heard the old man shout, “Remember, not past sundown!”  Charlie turned back at the top of the path. The old man was gone.

Chapter 3, by Mark Merrell, published Oct. 24, 2011

Charlie’s dad came racing past with his fishing vest on and carrying his huge tackle box,  straight-legging it down the hill looking like he was going to fall with each step.

“Come on Charlie, it is getting dark!”

Charlie bounded after him.

Half an hour later they reached their favorite spot, just south of the peninsula that jutted out from the shore opposite their cabin to the north. Thick pine trees blocked their view of the resort’s lights. Dusk was falling. 

“Dad, an old guy was by our boat just now, and he told me to get off the lake before sundown.” 

His dad said, “He probably saw what a serious fisherman you are and wanted to make sure you didn’t catch any of his muskies tonight.” 

“I dunno dad, he seemed pretty … concerned.” 

“You know what I’m concerned about Charlie, YOU.  I mean, pulling the fire alarm at school? What were you thinking?” 

“I know dad, I’m really trying…” 

Just then, Charlie saw a flash of white 30 yards away. 

“Dad, did you see that?”


“It looked like, like a white muskie!”

Charlie’s dad laughed, “An albino Muskie. If we catch him we’ll be in the paper for sure.” 

“There!” Charlie pointed to the other side of the boat. His Dad whirled around but it was gone again. They sat in silence. Charlie noticed his hands were white gripping his fishing pole. 

Splash! Out of the water jumped the biggest, whitest fish Charlie had ever seen. It was a muskie all right. It was ghostly white, and Charlie saw its sharp shiny teeth right before they bit hard into his dad’s arm.

“Aaaagh!” his dad screamed, thrashing his left arm side to side. It seemed to Charlie like forever, but finally the fish let go, and floated back down to the water.  It looked at Charlie and winked, then slid back under the surface.

Charlie had started the motor and steered the boat back to the resort.  His dad’s arm wasn’t bleeding much, but there were a dozen red tooth holes in his skin. He was hanging half off his seat, legs stretched across the boat bottom, moaning.

They were coasting into the dock and Charlie was going to scream for help when he heard splashes in the water behind him. He turned slowly around and saw at least fifteen white muskies staring back at him! His hand clasped over his mouth. He thought of his poor dad, and when he turned back to look at him, he was covered in scales and his eyes were morphing into giant fish eyes.

Charlie screamed – a scream that came from deep inside his very soul. A scream so loud that it echoed back from the forest across the mile-wide lake.  A scream that didn’t stop his father from flopping into the water, a human-sized, fully-formed, muskie.


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